Brochures

-Must be visually appealing to draw the audience in and accept the arguement
-Goes into detail on the main points, but can leave some of the finer details out due to spacial restrictions
-These finer points can be addressed by the person handing out the brochures
-A good use of visuals can enhance the brochure by making the ideas more attention-grabbing
-The brochure may take paragraph or list form for displaying information
-There should be a logical order and separation between types of information shown with proper headings

Initiating Action

I have decided to create a brochure to help the youth find a possible voice/haven in my chosen community. The medium would be a good way to be visually creative, as well as provide information that one may find useful, when looking for something more on campus. I may also tie the brochure to a powerpoint presentation that could give further information about aspects of the Newman Community, which may not be covered due to the spacial constraints of a brochure.

Response to the Draft Feedback

Concerning the feedback I was given, it looks like I gave information and support for my reasoning well. I gave adequate information and gave credit to those that it was due. I did expand upon points I drew from others and give my ideas concerning the material. But, I was still lacking in the personal aspect of my paper. My voice seemed to get lost in the facts. Also, I needed to draw the reader into my writing more than I had already done.